Can someone please check my Japanese Homework? Please just give some criticism and fix any errors that I have here. It's the one assignment that makes or breaks my Japanese Grade haha ( 89.8 )

The First page is the colored page, we have to color the page according to the passage at the bottom.
The second page is a fill in the blank and an answer the question page.
The lined paper is the translations of Section II on Page 40.

Thank you!!!