(1) Humans and androids crowd the raucous streets of New Beijing. (2) A deadly plague ravages the popullation. (3) From space, a ruthless lunar people watch, waiting to make there move. (4) No one knows that Earth’s fate hinges on one girl…

(5) Sixteen-year-old cinder, a gifted mechanic, is a cyborg. (6) She’s a second-class citizen with a mysterious past and is reviled by her step-mother. (7) But when her life becomes intertwined with her handsome Prince Kai’s, she suddenly finds herself at the center of an intergalactic struggle, and a forbidden attraction. (8) Caught between duty and freedom, loyalty and betrayal, she must uncover secrets about her past in order to protect her worlds future. (9) Because there is something unusual about Cinder, something that others would kill for.

Question 1 (2 points)
What change should be made in sentence 2?

Question 1 options:

change the period to a question mark

change A to An

change popullation to population

no change

Question 2 (2 points)
What change, if any, is needed in sentence 3?

Question 2 options:

delete the comma after space

change there to their

delete the comma after watch

make no change

Question 3 (2 points)
What change, if any, is needed in sentence 4?

Question 3 options:

change no one to none

change know to knew

change Earth's to Earths

no change needed

Question 4 (2 points)
What change should be made to sentence 5?

Question 4 options:

Change cinder to Cinder

delete the comma after cinder

change gifted to gift

no change needed

Question 5 (2 points)
What change, if any, is needed in sentence 8?

Question 5 options:

delete the comma after freedom

change the worlds to world's

change the period to a question mark

make no change

1. The word "popullation" in sentence 2 is wrongly spelt. It should have been spelt as "population" - population refers to the large community of people, in this case, it was used to refer to humans & androids.

2. The word "there" is a word used to describe the location or position of a thing or object. However, in sentence 3, the right word to use in the context of the narrative is the possessive pronoun "their" (referring to the lunar people).

3. The word "knows" in sentence 4 connotes a presents tense, however, since this is a narrative (an event which already took place), the word should have been rendered in the past tense form as "knew".

4. The word "cinder" in sentence 5 is the name of the girl spoken of in sentence 4 which implies that the word is a noun & as such, it should begin with an upper case letter, that is "Cinder".

5. The word "world" in sentence 8 is used in the possessive form in the context of and as such, it should have been spelt as "world's".